Words can create magic and I want to get lost in them for some part of each day.

May 14, 2012

The coils of Oil.

Navigating Oil 
is a tricky Business .
Like the Pakora ,
At right temperatures ,
You may puff up with self -importance 
And feel like a hot-shot for a while.
But a bit of squeezing or freezing 
and all you get is 
a blob of sad and soggy distasteful mess.
For thats what is left 
of the real you -
minus the oil .


  1. Wow Varsha! Deep Thought!! Profound philosophy so wonderfully expressed! Nice use of similes!

  2. Wow Varsha! Deep thought, profound philosophy so wonderfully expressed! Nice similes too!!

  3. dont embarass me: its a fairly bad poem : but I felt it so wrote it,

  4. believe it or not but I really liked the use of far fetched similes...very imaginative!

  5. Yes. 
    Pakora can be bad both ways, puffed up or deflated :-)
    Oil spoils it :-)